the guy with the critique of my writing style was absolutely correct.
the thing is this, i learned everything he said way back in the 60's. i
didn't care then, and i don't care now. HOWEVER.....if people are going
to have a cow over it then i should have more consideration in public.
now, if my attention deficit disorder will cooperate i will try to
behave myself. (i see that a lot of other people write poorly as i do.
it seems to be the norm on the net)