"tom" wrote in message
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SNIP

I read scopes of work (and other corp. docs) as a significant part of my
living. In other words, I'm a proofreader. So I understand being picky
about building sentences and paragraphs and documents.

It has to make sense as a whole, and if someone can't make even a single
sentence work, they surely can't make the whole work.

Agree.

I'm a decent writer but I rarely turn out something that can't be improved.
A good editor is like a good friend.

"Sal"